2004-2005学年度第一学期淮安市高一英语期末统测

高一期末调研考试 (Jan.2005)
英语试卷
本试卷分第1卷(选择题)和第Ⅱ卷(非选择题)两部分，共150分。考试时间120分钟。
注意：所有答案请全部写在答题纸上。

第I卷 (三部分，共105分)
第一部分：听力(共两节，满分20分)
第一节 听下面五段对话，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳答案。每段对话读一遍。
( ) 1. How does the man come here?
A. By bus. B. By taxi. C. By car.
( ) 2. Why isn’t Helen present?
A. She forgot to come. B. She changed her decision. C. She wasn’t invited.
( ) 3. What’s the probable relationship between the two speakers?
A. Husband and wife. B. Mother and son. C. Doctor and patient.
( ) 4. What’s the man’s job?
A. A shop assistant. B. A tailor. C. A salesman.
( ) 5. What does the man mean?
A. He can’t go to the cinema.
B. He can go to the cinema on Saturday morning.
C. He can go to the cinema on Saturday evening.
第二节 听下面5段对话或独白，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第6段材料，回答第6至7题。
( ) 6. When will the man go on holiday?
A. In spring. B. In summer. C. In winter.
( ) 7. Where is the man going?
A. Switzerland. B. Italy C. Austria.
听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。
( ) 8. What is the man?
A. A businessman. B. A salesman. C. A scientist.
( ) 9. Where does this conversation most probably take place?
A. On a train. B. On a bus. C. On a plane.
( ) 10. Why is the woman traveling?
A. She is traveling on holiday.
B. She is traveling on business.
C. She is traveling to give some lectures.
听第8段材料，回答第11至13题。
( ) 11. Why is the woman calling?
A. To buy a table. B. To book a table. C. to serve lunch.
( ) 12. When does this restaurant stop serving lunch?
A. 1 pm. B. 2 pm. C. 3 pm.
( ) 13. How many people will come with the woman for lunch?
A. One B. Two. C. Four.
听第9段材料，回答第14段至17题。
( ) 14. What is the man?
A. A nurse. B. A doctor. C. A chemist.
( ) 15. What is wrong with the woman?
A. She is well all over.
B. She has had a bad headache.
C. She has had a cough for three days.
( ) 16. what does the man tell the woman to do?
A. Stay in bed for some time and take some medicine.
B. Go around from time to time.
C. Come to see him tomorrow morning.
( ) 17. Where dies this conversation most probably take place?
A. In a garden. B. In the man’s office. C. In the woman’s house.
听第10段材料，回答第18题至20题。
( ) 18. What is the main topic of the passage?
A. The Barcelona Olympic Games.
B. TV programs on Chinese television.
C. Effects of television on our lives.
( ) 19. Where was the survey of 300 youngsters made?
A. In Shanghai. B. In Wuhan. C. In Beijing.
( ) 20. According to the passage, what is quickly taking the place of printed material as the major source of news for most Chinese?
A. Internet. B. TV. C. Radio.
第二部分：英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)
第一节：单项填空(共15题，满分15分)
从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填人空白处的最佳选项。
( ) 21. ---- How often do you eat out?
---- ________, but usually once a week.
A. Have no idea. B. It depends. C. As usual D. Generally speaking
( ) 22. Hiking is _______, but you shouldn’t forget safety.
A. funny and excited B. a fun and exciting
C. fun and exciting D. fun and excited
( ) 23. ______ so many people ______ in English every day, it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.
A. With; communicating B. As; communicated
C. With; communicated D. As; communicating
( ) 24. The people of St. Petersburg said they would do _______ their city.
A. what they could save B. everything they could to save
C. their best saving D. everything what they could to save
( ) 25. Do you know the difficulty he has ______ what eco—travel means ?
A. understand B. understands C. have understanding D. understanding
( ) 26. ---- Thanks for ___me of the meeting this morning.
---- You’re welcome.
A. advising B. suggesting C. reminding D. telling
( ) 27. In the western world, they have a different ______ of life from ours.
A. plan B. path C. means D. way
( ) 28. The young scientist made another wonderful discovery, _______of great importance to science.
A. which I think it is B. which I think it
C. I think which is D. which I think is
( ) 29. Peter’s birthday is only two weeks _____. What do you have ______?
A. far; at present B. away; at present
C. far; in mind D. away, in mind
( ) 30. I was _____ the classroom _____ the head teacher stopped me.
A. leaving; while B. about to leave; when
C. leaving; then D. about to leave; while
( ) 31. Betty stood _____ to her teacher and watched _____ what her teacher was doing.
A. close; closely B. close; close C. closely; closely D. closely; close
( ) 32. Talks between the two countries have completely _____ because neither of them agreed to give in.
A. broken out B. broke down C. broken in D. broken away
( ) 33. Plants grow well _____ there’s enough water and sunshine.
A. the place where B. where
C. in the place which D. in which
( ) 34. He has _____ all his time _____ helping the poor.
A. used; to B. taken; to C. devoted; to D. spend on
( ) 35. The mayor of Beijing says that all construction work for the Beijing Olympics ______ by 2006.
A. has been completed B. has completed
C. will have been completed D. will have completed
第二节：完形填空(共20小题，每题1．5分，计30分)
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从每小题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
Do you know what kind of things young people are reading? More and more ___36___ and parents have noticed another kind of ___37___, which comes from the printed papers ___38___ on streets. These printed things ___39___ newspapers but have hardly ___40___ to do with them. Some are too strange for anyone to ___41___ ; others are frightening stories of something ___42___ . ___43___ ,many of the young readers are getting interested in such ___44___ reading, which costs them ___45___ they should pay for their breakfast and brings them nightmares(噩梦)and immoral(邪恶) ideas in return. Homework was left ___46___ ; daily games lost.
These sellers shout on streets selling their papers well. The writers and printers, ___47___ they are, we never know, are ___48___their ill- gotten(黑心)money.
The sheep- disguised(伪装)wolf's story seems to have been forgotten. Why not ___49___ this kind of things? Yes, both the teachers and parents ___50___ each other for more strict control of the young readers.___51___ , the more you want to stop it, the more they want to have a look at it. ___52___you may even find out several children, driven by their curious natures(好奇的天性), ___53___ one paper, which has traveled from hand to hand.
It really has become a kind of moral（道德的） pollution. The ___54___teachers and parents need more powerful support. At the same time the young ___55___ need more interesting and healthy books to help them throw away those harmful papers.
( ) 36. A. teachers B. writers C. readers D. students
( ) 37. A. pollution B. thought C. need D. material
( ) 38. A. found B. sold C. given D. selling
( ) 39. A. appear B. seem as C. look like D. are
( ) 40. A. nothing B. anything C. something D. everything
( ) 41. A. find B. believe C. know D. get
( ) 42. A. too bad B. even worse C. even better D. very good
( ) 43. A. However B. But C. Although D. So
( ) 44. A. poisonous(有毒的)B. wonderful C. interesting D. useful
( ) 45. A. which B. what C. that D. whatever
( ) 46. A. undone B. unknown C. much D. less
( ) 47. A. what B. who C. whatever D. whoever
( ) 48. A. making B. using C. spending D. losing
( ) 49. A. allow B. stop C. separate D. leave
( ) 50. A. had asked B. have asked C. will ask D. asked
( ) 51. A. Happily B. Luckily C. Unluckily D. Lately
( ) 52. A. Sometimes B. Always C. Hardly D. Never
( ) 53. A. find B. share C. get D. hold
( ) 54. A. worried B. surprised C. excited D. exciting
( ) 55. A. writers B. teachers C. parents D. readers
第三部分：阅读理解(共15小题，每题2分，计30分)
阅读下列短文，然后从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
( A )
What is the E-mail
The e-mail, which is also called email, stands for “electronic mail”. You can send messages in only a few seconds by e-mail.
On the Internet there are many powerful computers called “servers” to help people send and receive emails. The sending and receiving servers are just like post offices. If you want to use the email service, you have to open at least an email account(账户) called a “mailbox”, just like we set up a mailbox in a post office. Some mailboxes are provided free of charge(免费) by ISPs, which you can get when you open an Internet account. Most widely used mailboxes are provided free by the ISPs, and anyone can apply(申请) for one even if he has no ISP account.
How to apply for a free mailbox? First you have to connect to the Internet and go to the homepage(主页) of the ISP providing free mailboxes. Then you’ll find an icon(符号) showing “apply for a free mailbox”, click the icon, an agreement about the rules for using the free mailbox will appear. If you want to go on, click the icon “I agree”. Then you have to fill in a form about your basic personal data(资料，数据), and the name and pin of the mailbox. The pin is the key to the mailbox. After finishing these, you’ll get a mailbox like this: your name @ mail server, for example: jack@ 163. com. The mailbox is separated into two parts by a separator “@”, which is read as “at”. The former part is the name of the mailbox. The latter (后者) is the domain name(域名) of the mail server. All mails to you will be received by the server and put into your mailbox. You can read this mail on any computer in the world as long as you have the name and pin of the mailbox.
( ) 56. If you want to send or receive an email, you should first _____.
A. write to the ISPs B. fill in a form
C. apply for a mailbox D. go to the post office
( ) 57. When you get a FREE mailbox, you can send an email _____.
A. at any place B. without obeying any rules
C. to any one D. without paying any money
( ) 58. Here is an email address ecpjyb@ecp.com.cn. What is the name of the mailbox?
A. ecp. B. ecp.com.cn C. com.cn D. ecpjyb
( ) 59. The writer mainly wants to tell us how to _____ in this passage.
A. send or receive a letter by email
B. set up a free emailbox
C. set up one’s email address
D. read the email on any computer in the world
( ) 60. Which of the following is TRUE?
A. If you have no money, you can’t apply for a box.
B. People can send messages within several seconds by email.
C. You can also receive an email without using a mailbox.
D. If you want to send an email, you have to inform the post office.
( B )
If you are in a town in a western country, you'll often see people walking with their dogs. It is still true that a dog is the most useful animal in the world. But the reason why one keeps a dog has changed Once upon a time, a man met a dog and wanted it to help him in the fight against other animals, and he found that the dog listened to him and did what he told him to. Later people used dogs for the hunting other animals, and the dogs didn't eat what they got until their master agreed. So dogs were used for driving sheep and guarding chicks. But now the people in the towns and cities do not need dogs to fight other animals. Of course they keep them to frighten thieves, but the most important reason is that people feel lonely in the city. For a child, a dog is his best friend when he has no friends to play with. For a young wife, a dog is her child when she doesn’t have her own. For old people, a dog is also a child when their real children have grown up and left. Now people do not have to use a dog, but they keep it as a friend, just like a member of the family.
( ) 61. _______are more useful than a dog in the world.
A. No other animals B. Some animals C. Many animals D. A few animals
( ) 62. In the past people kept dogs because dogs _________.
A. could fight against other animals B. met the people
C. did not eat other animals D. helped and listened to people
( ) 63. Now people keep dogs in the cities because dogs_____.
A. fight other animals B. are lonely
C. are like their friends D. are afraid of the thieves
( ) 64.A dog can be _____.
A. a child's friend only B. a young woman's son
C. old people's real child D. everybody's friend
( ) 65. So a dog will __ in a family.
A. always be used B. not be useful C. still fight D. always be a good friend
( C )
The following two reports are taken from 21 st Century Teens Senior Edition.
Sun retires at last ---- Sun Wen, captain of China’s national women’s football team, announced her retirement on October 2 after China was knocked out of the World Cup. “Football is just a game, now life must move on,” said the 30-year-old.
She plans to finish her international relations studies at Fudan University, but has not decide what to do after graduation. “Maybe I will become a coach(教练)，”she said.
Kwan to help out ---- Chinese American figure skater(花样滑冰选手)Michelle Kwan(关颖珊)will appear in a Times Square advertisement encouraging young people to have good values.
As part of the “ Pass It On” campaign(运动), the five-time world champion will appear on 10,000 advertisements across the US.
“Michelle Kwan provides a great opportunity to inspire(鼓舞)young people with a good role model,” said an advertising expert.
( ) 66. Which is NOT true according to the first report?
A. Sun Wen decided to be a coach after graduation.
B. Sun Wen has left the national women’s football team.
C. Sun Wen used to be captain of our national women’s football team.
D. Sun is studying at Fudan University.
( ) 67. “after China was knocked out of the World Cup”. The underlined phrase mean the same as in “_____________”.
A. The long drive really knocked me out.
B. The blow on the head knocked him out.
C. Our team was knocked out in the first part of the competition.
D. For a moment I was completely knocked out by the news of my friend’s death.
( ) 68. The second report is about ___________.
A. Kwan’s wonderful performance on the sports field.
B. Kwan’s wonderful performance on the T stage.
C. Kwan’s success as a figure skater.
D. Kwan’s appearance on advertisements as part of a campaign in the US.
( ) 69. Why will Kwan appear in the advertisement?
A. Because she wants to earn money from the ad.
B. Because she wants to inspire young people to have good values.
C. Because she wants to show off.
D. Because she wants to make her career take off.
( ) 70. In which column may these two reports appear in the newspaper?
A. Science life B. World around us
C. Culture and Leisure D. Learning with us

第Ⅱ卷 (两部分，共45分)
第一部分：基础知识（共三节，满分20分）
第一节：单词拼写（共10 小题，每题0.5分，计5分）
1. F________ is the flat part of a person’s face above the eyes and below the hair.
2. I can’t make up my mind because there is a wide v________ of patterns to choose from.
3. A________ from China did quite a good job in Athens Olympics.
4. Thanks to the Hope P________, many poor children can go back to school.
5. Every morning Dad reads newspaper in order to keep up with the l________ information.
6. Parents should keep it in mind that teenagers hate being ______(对待)like children.
7. In the school, new safety _______(措施)are to be introduced after a child was killed.
8. Words can’t ________(表达)how pleased I was when I heard my team won the World Cup.
9. When a person comes to a new society, he will probably have _______(文化的)difficulties.
10. I have no _______(选择);I must do as I am told to.
第二节：从方框内选出最佳词组完成下列句子。（共10题，每题1分，计10分）
on the go; in preparation for; take off; think highly of; lead to; in ruins; adapted to; turn to; have much in common; came across
1. When we moved to France, the children ________ the change very well.
2. I’m feeling very tired; I’ve been _______ ever since 8 o’clock this morning.
3. A recent research shows that eating too much sugar can _______ all sorts of health problems.
4. When meeting with some new words, we often _____ the dictionary.
5. I _______ this book in a second-hand bookshop.
6. The city of Berlin was ______ at the end of World War II.
7. Don’t be excited; go and get a good night’s sleep ________ tomorrow’s outing.
8. Zhao Wei’s career began to _______ after she played the role of “Little Swallow (Xiao Yanzi)”.
9. Many people _______ the movie “A World Without Thieves”(天下无贼), which was directed by Feng Xiaogong.
10. Although they can’t get along well, Lucy and Lily _____________.
第三节：根据汉语提示完成下列句子，每空字数不限。（共5题，每题1分，计5分）
1. Steven Spielberg说他的大部分的成功与快乐归功于他的妻子和孩子。
Steven Spielberg said that he ________________ his wife and children.
2. 当为某人健康而干杯时，要举起酒杯。
When ___________________, you raise your glasses.
3. 奥运箴言是“更快，更高，更强。”
The Olympic motto is ________________________.
4. 圣彼得堡遭到攻击达900天，但是这座城市的人民从未屈服。
St. Petersburg was ________ for 900 days, but the people of the city never ________.
5. 我们必须充满自信，乐于助人，这样才能的过好生活。
We must _________________ and be ready to help others if we want to be happy and _______________.
第二部分：写作（共两节，满分25分）
请直接在答题纸上答题
第一节：单句改错（共10题，每题1分，计10分）
1. There are ten people in the room, included four women.
2. They have got married for 25 years.
3. The teacher gave us some advices on how to learn English well.
4. I’m considering to pay a visit to my old teacher.
5. Tom, together with his parents, are now in China.
6. The reason why people try to kill the bears is because they want to make money.
7. This made necessary for the earth to support more people.
8. Hip-hop and rap are complete different from blues and rock.
9. I don’t like the way which he speaks.
10. Great changes have been taken place in our hometown.
第二节：书面表达（共1题，计15分）
21 st Century Teens Edition 正征集有关2008北京奥运会志愿者（volunteer）的资料，请根据下面提示发一封E-mail 介绍自己的情况。
1. 名叫李华，现年17岁，就读于江苏一重点中学高一。
2. 喜欢英语，利用业余时间观看英语节目，练习英语口语，并取得了很大进步。现在已能流利地和学校的外籍教师交谈。
3. 爱好体育，正学习有关体育运动的俗语（terms）。
4. 希望成为一名志愿者，为北京奥运会作出贡献（contribution）。
注意：
应包括以上要点，但不要逐字对译，要组成一片通顺连贯的短文。
字数 约 100。
Email 的格式已给出。
TO: Jackliu@21stcentury.com.cn
Subject: self-introduction
Dear sir,

淮安市2004 ~2005学年度第一学期期末调研测试高一英语试题
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第二卷
第一部分：第一节
1. F_________ 2. v_________ 3. A_________ 4. P_________ 5. l__________
6. __________ 7. __________ 8. __________ 9. ___________ 10. __________
第二节
1. _____________________ 2. _____________________ 3. _____________________
4. _____________________ 5. _____________________ 6. _____________________
7. _____________________ 8. _____________________ 9. _____________________
10. ____________________
第三节
1. _______________________ 2. ___________________ 3. ______________________
4. ______________, ________________ 5. _________________, ___________________
第二部分；第一节
1. There are ten people in the room, included four women. ___________
2. They have got married for 25 years. ___________
3. The teacher gave us some advices on how to learn English well. ___________
4. I’m considering to pay a visit to my old teacher. ___________
5. Tom, together with his parents, are now in China. ___________
6. The reason why people try to kill the bears is because they want to make money. __________
7. This made necessary for the earth to support more people. ____________
8. Hip-hop and rap are complete different from blues and rock. ____________
9. I don’t like the way which he speaks. ___________
10. Great changes have been taken place in our hometown. ____________
第二节
TO: Jackliu@21stcentury.com.cn
Subject: self-introduction
Dear sir,

淮安市2004-2005学年度第一学期期末调研试卷高一英语参考答案及听力材料
听力材料
Text 1
W: How do you get here?
M: I come here by bus. There’s something wrong with my car.
Text 2
M: Helen isn’t here yet. Did you forget to invite her?
W: She was going to come, but then changed her mind .
Text 3
M: Do you have a temperature?
W: I don’t know. I haven’t taken it. Can you take my temperature now, sir?
Text 4
M: May I help you?
W: The collar on this jacket is too small. Can you make it larger?
M: Let me look at it. I can do it for twenty dollars.
Text 5
W: Will you go to the cinema this Saturday?
M: I’m afraid I can’t. I’ll have my music lessons then.
W; I didn’t mean in the morning or afternoon. I meant in the evening.
M: Oh, that’s quite a different thing.
Text 6
M: When shall I go on holiday?
W: When do you want to go? You can go in spring, summer, autumn or winter.
M: Winter?
W: Yes. You can go to Switzerland or Austria or….
M: No, I’d like to go away in spring, in May, to Italy.
W: How long will you be away?
M: For three weeks.
W: Look! Here’s a good holiday in Italy. From the 10th of May to the 1st of June.
M: All right. I’d like to go on that trip.
Text 7
W: I hope we’ll have a good flight.
M: So do I. I don’t like flying.
W: Are you going on holiday?
M: No, I am traveling on business. I’m a salesman. I work for a computer company.
W: How interesting!
M: And you?
W: I am a physicist. I am going to give some lectures.
M: Really? In English?
W: Yes, of course. Scientists all over the world speak English.
M: Would you like to have a drink?
W: No, thank you.
Text 8
M: Paulanar Restaurant. Head waiter. Good morning.
W: I’d like to book a table for two.
M: And is that for today, madam?
W: Of course.
M: At what time, madam?
W; Oh, about three o’clock, I suppose.
M: I’m afraid we only serve lunch till 3 pm, madam.
W; Oh, well two o’clock then, and it must be by a window.
M: Very good, and what name, please?
W: White. Mrs Linda White.
M: Very good, Mrs White. A table for two at 2 pm. Today.
Text 9
M: Hello, Carol. What seems to be the trouble?
W: So kind of you to come to see me. I don’t know what’s wrong. Three days ago, while planting roses in the garden, it rained and I got completely wet, and I’ve had a cough since that night. Now I ache all over.
M: Well, let me take a look at you. Are you still coughing very much?
W; Yes, and my stomach has been upset. In addition, I always feel sick.
M: Hmmm. You’re running a high fever, I’m afraid.
W: Oh, no wonder I’ve got a hot face.
M: Well Carol, I think you’ve got the flu. These days there has been a lot of flu going around. I want you to stay in bed for at least two days, drink plenty of water, and take the medicine three times a day. I’ll look in on you tomorrow morning.
W; Very good. Thank you very much.
Text 10
How does television affect our lives? It can be helpful to those who carefully choose the programs that they watch and harmful to those who watch it too much.
In China, many people worry about that children and young people are watching too much television. A survey of 300 youngsters in Shanghai last year showed that, on average, they spent half of their free time, that is two and a half hours watching television. And two-thirds of an hour reading stories. Another survey of school age children in Wuhan found out that half of them said they read very little.
During the Barcelona Olympic Games, tens of millions of Chinese viewers stayed up late to watch the opening ceremonies and other programs. And television is quickly taking the place of printed material as the major source of news for most Chinese. A recent survey in Beijing found that 63% of those surveyed got their news from television through CCTV and TV stations.

参考答案
听力部分
1- 5 A B C B C 6- 10 A B B C C 11- 15 B C A B C 16- 20 A C C A B
单选题
21- 25 D C A B B 26- 30 C D D D B 31- 35 A B B C C
完形填空
36- 40 A A B C B 41- 45 B B A A B 46- 50 A D A B B 51- 55 C A B A D
阅读理解
56- 60 C D D A B 61- 65 A D C D D 66- 70 A C D B C
单词拼写
1. Forehead 2. variety 3. Athletes 4. Project 5. latest
6. treated 7. measures 8. express 9. cultural 10. choice
选词填空
1. adapted to 2. on the go 3. lead to 4. turn to 5. came across
6. in ruins 7. in preparation for 8. take off 9. think highly of 10. have much in common
完成句子
1. owes much of his success and happiness 2. drinking to someone’s health
3. Faster, Higher, Stronger 4. under attack; gave in
5. believe in ourselves; live a good life
单句改错
1. included改为including 2. got改为been 3. advices改为advice 4. to pay 改为paying
5. are改为is 6. because改为that 7.made后加it 8. complete改为completely
9. which 改为that 或in which 或去掉 10. been 去掉
书面表达
一、评分原则：
1．本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5．拼写及标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6．如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档（13—15分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
* 覆盖所有内容要点。
* 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
* 语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力。
* 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档（10—12分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
* 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但履盖所有主要内容。
* 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
* 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
* 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档（7—9分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务
* 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
* 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
* 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
* 应用简单的语句间接连接成分，使全文内容连贯，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（4—7分）
末恰当完成试题规定的任务。
* 漏掉或未描叙清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
* 语法结构简单、词汇项目有限。
* 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
* 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档（1—3分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
* 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
* 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
* 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
* 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯，信息未能传达给读者。

0分
* 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容与要求内容无关或内容无法看清。

One possible version:
Dear sir,
The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Our capital, Beijing, which is a great honor for all the Chinese. I hope sincerely to be a volunteer to make contributions to this great event. Below is a brief introduction about myself.
I am 17 years old and now studying in a key middle school in Jiangsu Province. I like English very much and hence I’m quite good at it. I watch English programmes in my spare time and often practise my spoken English. Now I can talk fluently with our foreign teachers. Besides English, I am also fond of sports. To be fit for the job, I’m studying some special terms about different sports.
I hope I can meet the requirements of being a volunteer.
Yours,
Li Hua