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The next step in the writing process is producing a rough draft. A rough
draft translates your list of details into sentences full of description,
action, and detail. Once you have written the first draft, the real work begins.
As you edit your draft, you will analyze each sentence for clarity; you will
evaluate your overall sentence structure to be sure you have variety in your
sentences; you will look at the words you've chosen to be sure they are
accurate. As you go through additional drafts you will also evaluate the grammar
and mechanics of your sentences to be sure that you don't have any grammatical
errors. Once you have edited the paragraph, you are almost finished with the
writing process. All that remains is the Final lines.